Đề bài IELTS Writing Task 2 dạng Agree or Disagree Part 69:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
All citizens should be required to do a year of community service. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
Giải mẫu IELTS Writing
Community service is an invaluable aspect of societal development, fostering a sense of unity and collective responsibility. While the notion of mandating a year of community service for all citizens may seem appealing, I partially agree with this idea. This approach has its merits, but imposing it as a compulsory requirement might lead to unintended consequences.
On the one hand, mandatory community service can yield numerous benefits. It can instill a sense of civic duty and social responsibility among citizens, particularly the youth. By participating in community service, individuals can develop empathy, understanding, and a stronger connection to their communities. Furthermore, it provides an opportunity for personal growth, enhancing skills such as teamwork, communication, and problem-solving. These experiences can be particularly valuable for young people, potentially influencing their future career choices and personal development.
Additionally, community service can address various social issues. With more citizens engaged in volunteer work, there would be a greater collective effort to tackle problems such as poverty, environmental degradation, and lack of education. This collective action can lead to significant improvements in community well-being and resilience.
However, making community service mandatory for all citizens has potential drawbacks. Forcing individuals to participate in such activities may lead to resentment and a lack of genuine engagement. The essence of volunteer work lies in its voluntary nature; when people are compelled to serve, the quality of their contribution may diminish. This could result in a scenario where individuals participate merely to fulfill a requirement, rather than out of a genuine desire to help.
Moreover, imposing a mandatory year of community service could be logistically challenging and financially burdensome. Implementing such a policy would require significant resources to organize and manage the various programs, ensuring they are meaningful and impactful. There is also the question of fairness, as not everyone may have the same capacity or circumstances to participate, such as those with financial constraints, health issues, or caregiving responsibilities.
In conclusion, while the idea of mandatory community service has its advantages in promoting civic engagement and addressing social issues, it should not be imposed as a strict requirement. Encouraging voluntary participation through incentives and education would likely be a more effective approach. This way, individuals can contribute to their communities willingly and meaningfully, preserving the spirit of volunteerism.
Cấu trúc ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu
Thống kê cấu trúc câu và cấu trúc ngữ pháp
- Câu phức:
- “While the notion of mandating a year of community service for all citizens may seem appealing, I partially agree with this idea.”
- “While the idea of mandatory community service has its advantages in promoting civic engagement and addressing social issues, it should not be imposed as a strict requirement.”
- Câu ghép:
- “It can instill a sense of civic duty and social responsibility among citizens, particularly the youth.”
- “Furthermore, it provides an opportunity for personal growth, enhancing skills such as teamwork, communication, and problem-solving.”
- “This approach has its merits, but imposing it as a compulsory requirement might lead to unintended consequences.”
- “This could result in a scenario where individuals participate merely to fulfill a requirement, rather than out of a genuine desire to help.”
- “There is also the question of fairness, as not everyone may have the same capacity or circumstances to participate, such as those with financial constraints, health issues, or caregiving responsibilities.”
- Câu đơn:
- “Community service is an invaluable aspect of societal development, fostering a sense of unity and collective responsibility.”
- “By participating in community service, individuals can develop empathy, understanding, and a stronger connection to their communities.”
- “Additionally, community service can address various social issues.”
- “Forcing individuals to participate in such activities may lead to resentment and a lack of genuine engagement.”
Cấu trúc ngữ pháp
- Hiện tại đơn:
- “Community service is an invaluable aspect of societal development.”
- “It can instill a sense of civic duty and social responsibility among citizens.”
- “Community service can address various social issues.”
- Hiện tại hoàn thành:
- “While the idea of mandatory community service has its advantages…”
- Động từ nguyên mẫu có ‘to’:
- “to do a year of community service”
- “to tackle problems such as poverty, environmental degradation, and lack of education”
- Danh động từ (Gerund):
- “participating in community service”
- “imposing it as a compulsory requirement”
- Câu điều kiện:
- “This could result in a scenario where individuals participate merely to fulfill a requirement.”
Các từ kết nối các câu và các đoạn
- While: Liên kết các ý trái ngược nhau.
- “While the notion of mandating a year of community service for all citizens may seem appealing, I partially agree with this idea.”
- “While the idea of mandatory community service has its advantages in promoting civic engagement and addressing social issues, it should not be imposed as a strict requirement.”
- Furthermore: Thêm thông tin bổ sung.
- “Furthermore, it provides an opportunity for personal growth, enhancing skills such as teamwork, communication, and problem-solving.”
- Additionally: Bổ sung thêm thông tin.
- “Additionally, community service can address various social issues.”
- However: Chuyển ý, thể hiện sự đối lập.
- “However, making community service mandatory for all citizens has potential drawbacks.”
- Moreover: Thêm thông tin có liên quan.
- “Moreover, imposing a mandatory year of community service could be logistically challenging and financially burdensome.”
- In conclusion: Tổng kết ý tưởng.
- “In conclusion, while the idea of mandatory community service has its advantages in promoting civic engagement and addressing social issues, it should not be imposed as a strict requirement.”
- This way: Giới thiệu giải pháp hoặc cách tiếp cận.
- “This way, individuals can contribute to their communities willingly and meaningfully, preserving the spirit of volunteerism.”
Các từ vựng tiếng Anh cần lưu ý trong bài viết
- Community service – Dịch vụ cộng đồng
- Societal development – Phát triển xã hội
- Fostering – Nuôi dưỡng
- Unity – Sự đoàn kết
- Collective responsibility – Trách nhiệm tập thể
- Merits – Ưu điểm
- Imposing – Áp đặt
- Compulsory requirement – Yêu cầu bắt buộc
- Civic duty – Nghĩa vụ công dân
- Empathy – Sự đồng cảm
- Understanding – Sự hiểu biết
- Connection – Sự kết nối
- Personal growth – Phát triển cá nhân
- Teamwork – Làm việc nhóm
- Communication – Giao tiếp
- Problem-solving – Giải quyết vấn đề
- Volunteer work – Công việc tình nguyện
- Engagement – Sự tham gia
- Environmental degradation – Suy thoái môi trường
- Well-being – Sự thịnh vượng, sức khỏe
- Resentment – Sự phẫn nộ
- Genuine – Chân thật
- Essence – Bản chất
- Logistically – Về mặt hậu cần
- Financially burdensome – Gánh nặng tài chính
- Implementing – Thực hiện
- Meaningful – Có ý nghĩa
- Impactful – Có ảnh hưởng
- Fairness – Sự công bằng
- Constraints – Hạn chế
- Circumstances – Hoàn cảnh
- Incentives – Sự khuyến khích
- Education – Giáo dục
- Voluntary participation – Sự tham gia tự nguyện
- Preserving – Bảo tồn
- Spirit of volunteerism – Tinh thần tình nguyện
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