IELTS Writing Band 5.0–6.5 1 câu · 40 phút
IELTS Fluent · Đầu vào · Writing: Working from Home
Writing Task 2 đầu vào khoá Fluent: dạng "advantages outweigh disadvantages" về xu hướng làm việc tại nhà, tối thiểu 250 từ trong 40 phút. Có bài mẫu band 6.5–7.0 và gợi ý dàn ý để tự chấm.
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Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.
In many countries, more and more people are choosing to work from home instead of going to an office every day.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Bài mẫu tham khảo
In recent years, a growing number of employees have started working from home, at least for part of the week. Although this trend has some drawbacks, I believe that its advantages are more significant.
The main benefit of remote work is the time and money it saves. Instead of spending an hour or more travelling to the office every day, employees can use this time to rest, exercise or be with their families. They also spend less on petrol, public transport and lunches outside. In big cities such as Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City, where traffic jams are common, this can make a real difference to people's quality of life. In addition, many people find that they can concentrate better at home because there are fewer interruptions from colleagues.
On the other hand, working from home can cause certain problems. Some workers feel lonely and isolated, especially if they live alone. Communication within a team may also become less effective, since it is harder to solve problems quickly through emails or video calls than in a face-to-face meeting. Furthermore, the boundary between work and personal life can become unclear, and some employees end up working longer hours than before.
However, I would argue that these disadvantages can be reduced with good management. Companies can organise regular team meetings in the office, for example once or twice a week, and set clear rules about working hours. Employees, for their part, can create a separate workspace at home to help them switch off at the end of the day.
In conclusion, while remote work may lead to loneliness and communication difficulties, these issues are manageable. The savings in time and money, together with greater flexibility, mean that the benefits of this trend clearly outweigh its drawbacks.
Dạng "advantages outweigh disadvantages": phải nêu rõ quan điểm ngay mở bài và nhắc lại ở kết bài. Dàn ý 5 đoạn: (1) mở bài + quan điểm; (2) lợi ích: tiết kiệm thời gian, chi phí đi lại, tập trung hơn; (3) bất lợi: cô đơn, giao tiếp nhóm kém, lẫn lộn giờ làm và đời sống; (4) vì sao bất lợi khắc phục được (họp định kỳ, quy định giờ làm) → lợi ích lớn hơn; (5) kết luận. Từ vựng nên dùng: remote work, commute, interruptions, isolated, face-to-face, work-life boundary, switch off, outweigh. Lỗi hay gặp: chỉ liệt kê ưu – nhược mà không so sánh bên nào nặng hơn; dùng "In my opinion" lặp lại nhiều lần; viết dưới 250 từ.
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