IELTS Writing Band 5.5–7.5 1 câu · 40 phút
Luyện theo cấu trúc Cambridge IELTS 4 · Writing Task 2: Children and Outdoor Play
Đề tự soạn bởi The Real IELTS theo cấu trúc Cambridge IELTS 4 — không phải đề gốc trong sách. Writing Task 2 dạng Causes – Solutions (nguyên nhân và giải pháp) về việc trẻ em ngày càng ít chơi ngoài trời. Viết tối thiểu 250 từ trong 40 phút; có bài mẫu band 7.0–7.5 và gợi ý dàn ý.
Questions 1–0
Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.
In many countries, children now spend much less time playing outdoors than previous generations did.
What are the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage children to play outside more?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
0 từ · tối thiểu 250
Bài mẫu tham khảo
A generation ago, most children spent their free afternoons playing in the street, in parks or in nearby fields. Today, by contrast, many young people rarely play outside at all. This essay will examine the main reasons for this change and suggest some practical ways of reversing it.
The most obvious cause is the growing appeal of screens. Tablets, games consoles and video platforms are designed to hold children's attention for as long as possible, and outdoor games struggle to compete. A second, equally important factor is parental anxiety. Busier roads and widespread media coverage of crime have made many parents reluctant to let their children out of sight, even though statistically most neighbourhoods are no more dangerous than they were thirty years ago. Finally, in rapidly growing cities, open spaces have often been replaced by housing and car parks.
Tackling this problem requires action from both families and local authorities. City councils could protect existing green spaces and create small play areas within residential blocks, where parents can supervise children from their windows. Some cities have also experimented with closing certain streets to traffic for a few hours each week, which allows children to play safely near their homes. Schools could also extend break times and hold some lessons outdoors. Parents, meanwhile, could limit screen time and join their children outside, since young people are far more likely to adopt habits that they see their parents enjoying.
In conclusion, the decline in outdoor play is mainly the result of digital entertainment, parental fears and a shortage of suitable space. With better urban planning and a more active approach from schools and families, however, children could once again enjoy the physical and social benefits of playing outside.
Dàn ý 4 đoạn: (1) Mở bài — paraphrase đề (children rarely play outside / the decline in outdoor play) + nói rõ bài sẽ nêu nguyên nhân và giải pháp; (2) Thân 1 — 2–3 nguyên nhân có giải thích: thiết bị điện tử hấp dẫn, phụ huynh lo lắng về an toàn, đô thị thiếu không gian xanh; (3) Thân 2 — giải pháp gắn với từng nguyên nhân: chính quyền giữ công viên / đóng phố cho trẻ chơi, trường kéo dài giờ ra chơi, phụ huynh giới hạn giờ dùng màn hình và chơi cùng con; (4) Kết bài — tóm tắt. Từ vựng nên dùng: parental anxiety, reluctant to, supervise, green spaces, screen time, adopt habits, physical and social benefits. Lỗi hay gặp: chỉ liệt kê nguyên nhân mà không giải thích; giải pháp chung chung không khớp nguyên nhân; quên trả lời câu hỏi thứ hai.
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