IELTS Writing Band 5.0–6.5 1 câu · 40 phút
IELTS Tăng band Writing · Đầu vào · Writing: A Four-Day Working Week
Bài kiểm tra đầu vào: 1 đề Writing Task 2 dạng nêu ý kiến (đồng ý / không đồng ý), làm trong 40 phút, tối thiểu 250 từ. Dùng để xác định band Writing hiện tại và các lỗi cần ưu tiên sửa trong lộ trình.
Questions 1–0
Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.
Some people believe that companies should give their employees the option of working four days a week instead of five, without any reduction in pay. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
0 từ · tối thiểu 250
Bài mẫu tham khảo
In recent years, the idea of a four-day working week has become a popular topic of discussion. Some people argue that firms should allow staff to work one day less while keeping the same salary. I partly agree with this view, because although a shorter week can bring clear benefits, it is not suitable for every type of business.
On the one hand, a four-day week can make employees healthier and more productive. When people have three days off, they have more time to rest, exercise and spend time with their families, so they return to work with more energy. As a result, they often concentrate better and make fewer mistakes. For example, a friend of mine works for a small design company that tried this system last year, and the manager said that the team finished most projects on time even with fewer working hours. In addition, this policy can help companies to attract and keep good workers, because many young people now value free time as much as money.
On the other hand, this model may cause serious problems in some industries. Hospitals, restaurants and shops need staff every day, so if each worker only works four days, the employer has to hire more people to cover the missing shifts. This would increase costs, and small businesses might not be able to afford it. Moreover, customers could be unhappy if services become slower or less available.
In conclusion, I believe that offering a four-day week without cutting pay is a good idea for office-based companies where results matter more than hours. However, it should be an option rather than a rule for all businesses, since some sectors simply cannot operate with fewer working days.
Dàn ý 4 đoạn: (1) Mở bài – viết lại đề bằng từ của mình (paraphrase: 'work one day less while keeping the same salary') rồi nêu RÕ quan điểm ngay câu cuối (ví dụ: partly agree). (2) Thân bài 1 – lợi ích: sức khoẻ, năng suất, giữ chân nhân viên; mỗi ý có giải thích + ví dụ cụ thể. (3) Thân bài 2 – hạn chế: ngành cần người làm mỗi ngày (bệnh viện, nhà hàng), chi phí thuê thêm người, khách hàng chịu ảnh hưởng. (4) Kết luận – nhắc lại quan điểm, không thêm ý mới. Cấu trúc nên dùng: 'Although…, …'; 'As a result, …'; 'If each worker only works four days, the employer has to…'; 'This would increase…'. Từ vựng nên dùng: productivity, work-life balance, burnout, attract and retain staff, operating costs, cover shifts, office-based companies, sector. Lỗi hay gặp ở band 5.0–5.5: không nêu quan điểm ở mở bài hoặc đổi quan điểm giữa bài; bỏ quên vế 'without any reduction in pay'; lạc đề sang làm việc từ xa; lặp lại 'four-day week' quá nhiều lần (thay bằng 'a shorter week', 'this policy', 'this model'); ví dụ chung chung kiểu 'many people think'; kết luận đưa ý mới; viết dưới 250 từ.
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