IELTS Writing Band 5.0–6.5 1 câu · 20 phút
IELTS Tăng band Writing · Giữa khoá · Writing: Graduate Employment
Bài giữa khoá: 1 đề Writing Task 1 dạng bảng số liệu (tỉ lệ có việc làm của sinh viên mới tốt nghiệp theo ngành, kèm mức lương khởi điểm), làm trong 20 phút, tối thiểu 150 từ. Ôn kỹ năng mô tả thay đổi số liệu và so sánh đã học ở buổi 4–5.
Questions 1–0
Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
The table below shows the percentage of university graduates from five fields of study who had found full-time employment six months after graduating in one country in 2016 and 2024, and their average monthly starting salary in 2024.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
| Field of study | In full-time work after 6 months (2016) | In full-time work after 6 months (2024) | Average monthly starting salary, 2024 (USD) |
|---|---|---|---|
| Engineering | 78% | 85% | 1,450 |
| Information technology | 74% | 88% | 1,600 |
| Business | 69% | 66% | 1,150 |
| Education | 81% | 79% | 950 |
| Arts and design | 52% | 58% | 820 |
0 từ · tối thiểu 150
Bài mẫu tham khảo
The table compares the proportion of graduates from five fields of study who had found full-time jobs six months after finishing university in 2016 and 2024. It also shows their average monthly starting salary in 2024.
Overall, graduates in technical subjects, especially information technology, had the best job prospects and the highest pay by 2024, while arts and design graduates remained the least likely to find full-time work and earned the least.
In 2016, education graduates had the highest employment rate at 81%, followed closely by engineering (78%) and information technology (74%). By 2024, however, the figure for IT had risen sharply to 88%, overtaking all other fields, and engineering also increased to 85%. In contrast, the rates for education and business fell slightly, to 79% and 66% respectively. Arts and design saw a moderate rise from 52% to 58%, but it was still the lowest figure in both years.
Regarding salaries, IT graduates earned the most, at $1,600 per month, about $150 more than engineers. Business graduates received $1,150, while those in education and arts and design were paid less than $1,000, at $950 and $820 respectively.
Dàn ý 4 đoạn: (1) Mở bài – paraphrase đề, không chép nguyên câu ('the percentage of graduates who had found full-time employment' → 'the proportion of graduates who had found full-time jobs'). (2) Tổng quan – 2 đặc điểm nổi bật nhất, KHÔNG ghi số: ngành nào tốt nhất / kém nhất, xu hướng chung. (3) Thân bài 1 – tỉ lệ có việc năm 2016 rồi thay đổi đến 2024 (nhóm ngành tăng: IT, kỹ thuật, nghệ thuật; nhóm giảm nhẹ: giáo dục, kinh doanh). (4) Thân bài 2 – mức lương 2024, so sánh cao – thấp. Cấu trúc nên dùng: 'rose sharply from … to …', 'fell slightly to …', 'followed closely by …', '… and … respectively', 'about $150 more than …', 'less than $1,000'. Giới từ với số: 'at 81%', 'to 88%', 'from 52% to 58%', 'by 7 percentage points'. Lỗi hay gặp: thiếu đoạn tổng quan hoặc đưa số vào tổng quan; liệt kê từng ô trong bảng mà không so sánh; dùng sai thì (bảng có năm trong quá khứ → dùng quá khứ đơn); viết 'increase 7%' thay vì 'increase by 7 percentage points'; đưa ý kiến cá nhân giải thích nguyên nhân (Task 1 chỉ mô tả).
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